On the heels of the first table reading of the script a spirited discussion ensued at the breakfast production meeting.  The writers Wood Dickinson (also the producer) and Chris Ryan met with Rich Ambler the director on the project.

The first reading revealed several ways that the script could be tightened and made more dramatic.  Battles were waged on scenes and through a truly synergistic collaboration a much better product emerged.

The next version of the screen play will be ready in one week and soon after a second reading will reveal if the changes were effective.